Well, considering that this project is running for almost a year now (ok, the start of the real work was sometime in march, as i recall it) i think you can do better ;)
I mean - what does this picture want to tell us? It would be nice if you could also focus a bit on the technical side of the drawing - invest some time in the textures, the environment and general the quality.
You should either keep it completly b/w or color it properly.
Concept art should give a first impression of how the finished product could look like - as an inspiration for story writers and the 3d artists. The picture you present here is something inbetween and could need some improvement.
Anyway, I would suggest some more "informative" views on the city -
-> above the city from a distance (how does it integrate into the evironment, where is it actually located? Mountains, desert??
-> The most important buildings (like the market thing you show above)
-> some examples of the architecture/art
Btw Hi, Emraven - good to see that there is still something going on here, havent checked for some time
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